Hawk of Endymion-Battle Scars

I know, I'm awfull, uploading two versions of the same picture. >.> It was a super fun... Project though, and I just didn't feel finished after I put it on, before.
I coloured! This is definitley a first.

I am going to take one version of this image down, but I suppose I'll see... Which one gets more, if any views.
I'd really like comments/critique on this though, esspecially concerning the colouring. : D

Oh, and the idea, here was a realism-looking Mu La Flaga, for anybody who didn't get that. I wouldn't blame you. >.>

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